Writing in/of/through the ether

What I"m interested in Proposing...

I know we discussed what we want to propose the other day in class, but I guess I'll write down exaclty what I feel I could contribute to this project. First, I really like to write and I like to make writing enjoyable to everyone. The content in this web page is very dry. "The O’Neill, one of America’s forebearers in the support of new work for the stage, offers a wide range of programs that are sustained each year by contributions from friends in the theater community and through the generous support of public and private donors." Instead of having such a dry boring sentence like that, why don't we add some fun to it. I am just thinking off the top of my head, but we should make the O'Neill theater sound wonderful. It needs to be a place that everyone must visit like the New York Ballet. I mean I know it's just a small theater in Connecticut but people need to be excited about visiting. So we could say instead of that dry sentence: The O'Neill theater is a lively and entertaining institution located in....The theater uses contributions from friends, public and private donors to enrich the audience in this spectacular.... I mean I know that doesn't sound that great either, but if we could just use some more adjectives to really make the theater sound wonderful.
But besides the content, I would also like to help with anything else. Thanks.

posted by Anonymous @ 3:33 PM